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Wednesday 11 March 2020

This is just to say...

We were admitting our wrongs and turning it into a poem. We used the same format from William Williams  but using our wrongs from yesterday or 8 years ago. We had to extend our vocabulary  to hook the reader to keep them reading. We had to add a background that relates to our writing. I enjoyed refreshing my memory and I found that finding the describing words was quite hard. Here is mine:
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 March 2020 at 10:10

    Splendid work James good description

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  2. Anonymous12 March 2020 at 12:14

    great pictures and good vocabulary
    keep it up.

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  3. Anonymous12 March 2020 at 12:16

    amazing writing James,
    I really like how you explained about having a structure for your poem
    and how you refreshed your memory.

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  4. Anonymous18 March 2020 at 17:16

    Thats my KFC
    But MINT

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  5. Arman1 April 2020 at 09:53

    Hi James your writing was very interesting.

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