We were admitting our wrongs and turning it into a poem. We used the same format from William Williams but using our wrongs from yesterday or 8 years ago. We had to extend our vocabulary to hook the reader to keep them reading. We had to add a background that relates to our writing. I enjoyed refreshing my memory and I found that finding the describing words was quite hard. Here is mine:
Splendid work James good description
ReplyDeletegreat pictures and good vocabulary
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amazing writing James,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you explained about having a structure for your poem
and how you refreshed your memory.
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Hi James your writing was very interesting.
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